Monday, August 5, 2013

A Fun Birthday Party

                                                        August 5th , 2013
 Dear Laura, 

        I really loved your party. It was all playing, pouncing, & partying. I loved your brown, elegant dress. I loved your delicious mini sandwiches with ham, cheese, & lettuce. It tasted as though I was in food heaven. I felt like I was at a princess party and even though you are a rightful princess, it still felt magical. In someway it was different. You had a balloon maker that that came and made me an alien out of balloons.

    Then again, I keep thinking about the nails and the hair part. When I got my nails done, it was like a rainbow formed on my nails. They had a violet color with a wonderful glitter coding also with a hot pink French tip. For the hair, Laura's sister  "Lindsay" did my hair. She made me look as beautiful as a princess to be. It was like a new me.  


                                  Sincerely
                                         Cassandra Skweres

P.S. Please invite me to next years party. I want to see how you make your party fun next year.
    

2 comments:

  1. Your first paragraph is particularly effective. I like the alliteration and parallel structure. I'd like to see you play with the vocabulary next time:) Nice job.

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