Ouch! I fell and was now bleeding. I went hiking on a mountain and in a forest; but the path went away slowly without me knowing.
All of a sudden I saw a swarm of peacocks, and they sang with the other wonderful birds. I also saw rabbits sniffing flowers. I was amazed.
I traveled a while longer until something great happened. I found the path. Only thing was there was tracks of a tiger. I did it. I followed the path. Then I saw a fox. It's tail was fizzled up. I helped it.
The next half hour my hair was so messed up. It was now the afternoon. I was scared out of my mind of what I saw next.
It was a tiger. It's yellow eyes glowed. "MEOW" was what came out. Suddenly it was my cat. "I know you're hungry. " I said.
After a couple minutes we were back in the yard left to our imaginations!
I was totally shocked by your ending. Lots of imagery. I hear your writer's voice throughout!
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