A Great Movie
Is a awesome one.
An awesome one
Only comes around once in a while.
The rush,
The ripping excitement,
And the radiant projector.
The thrill is so powerful
It makes it hard not to watch.
It is as thrilling as the Kenywoods Black Widow.
COULD YOU EVER GET IT BETTER THAN THAT !!!!!!!!!!
I like your first attempt at poetry. Effective use of repetition and alliteration. Nice rhythm, too. Clean up the spelling to make it even better.
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